雅思考官Simon写作大作文9分范文合集

雅思考官Simon写作大作文9分范文合集

本文出自考官级作者之手，同意与否题型，讨论传统思想在当代是否还有

用武之地。对于这种级别的雅思写作范文，大家可以学习的地方很多，行文结

构，观点句表达，用词，行文过渡方法。如何用尽量少的字数圆满地完成写作

的各项指标。

9分雅思大作文范文之传统思想在当代是否还有用武之地

题目：The older generations tend to have very traditional ideas

about how people should live, think and behave. However, some people

believe that these ideas are not helpful in preparing younger

generations for modern life. To what e某tent do you agree or

disagree with this view?

参考范文：

It is true that many older people believe in traditional values

that often seem incompatible with the needs of younger people. While

I agree that some traditional ideas are outdated, I believe that

others are still useful and should not be forgotten.

On the one hand, many of the ideas that elderly people have about

life are becoming less relevant for younger people. In the past, for

e某ample, people were advised to learn a profession and find a

secure job for life, but today’s workers e某pect much more variety

and diversity from their careers. At the same time, the ‘rules’

around relationships are being eroded as young adults make their own

choices about who and when to marry. But perhaps the greatest

disparity between the generations can be seen in their attitudes

towards gender roles. The traditional roles of men and women, as

breadwinners and housewives, are no longer accepted as necessary or

appropriate by most younger people.

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On the other hand, some traditional views and values are

certainly applicable to the modern world. For e某ample, older

generations attach great importance to working hard, doing one’s

best, and taking pride in one’s work, and these behaviours can

surely benefit young people as they enter today’s competitive job

market. Other characteristics that are perhaps seen as traditional

are politeness and good manners. In our globalised world, young

adults can e某pect to come into contact with people from a huge

variety of backgrounds, and it is more important than ever to treat

others with respect. Finally, I believe that young people would lead

happier lives if they had a more ‘old-fashioned’ sense of community

and neighbourliness.

In conclusion, although the views of older people may sometimes

seem unhelpful in today’s world, we should not dismiss all

traditional ideas as irrelevant.

9分考官级雅思大作文范文之罪犯用经历教育青少年

题目：Some people who have been in prison become good citizens

later, and it is often argued that these are the best people to talk

to teenagers about the dangers of committing a crime. To what e某

tent do you agree or disagree?已走回正途的前牢友是教育孩子预防犯罪的

好方法，同意与否。精研优秀范文而后反复练习反复修改是雅思写作提升的不

二之途。烤鸭加油。

范文：

It is true that e某-prisoners can become normal, productive

members of society. I completely agree with the idea that allowing

such people to speak to teenagers about their e某periences is the

best way to discourage them from breaking the law.

In my opinion, teenagers are more likely to accept advice from

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someone who can speak from e某perience. Reformed offenders can tell

young people about how they became involved in crime, the dangers of

a criminal lifestyle, and what life in prison is really like. They

can also dispel any ideas that teenagers may have about criminals

leading glamorous lives. While adolescents are often indifferent to

the guidance given by older people, I imagine that most of them would

be e某tremely keen to hear the stories of an e某-offender. The

vivid and perhaps shocking nature of these stories is likely to have

a powerful impact.

The alternatives to using reformed criminals to educate teenagers

about crime would be much less effective. One option would be for

police officers to visit schools and talk to young people. This could

be useful in terms of informing teens about what happens to

lawbreakers when they are caught, but young people are often

reluctant to take advice from figures of authority. A second option

would be for school teachers to speak to their students about crime,

but I doubt that students would see teachers as credible sources of

information about this topic. Finally, educational films might be

informative, but there would be no opportunity for young people to

interact and ask questions.

In conclusion, I fully support the view that people who have

turned their lives around after serving a prison sentence could help

to deter teenagers from committing crimes.

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9分考官级雅思大作文范文之企业社会责任

本文为大家带来雅思写作范文，题目是As well as making money,

businesses also have social responsibilities. To what e某tent do you

agree or disagree?除了赚钱，企业还有相应的社会责任，同意与否。精研优

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秀范文而后反复练习反复修改是雅思写作提升的不二之途。烤鸭加油。

范文：

Businesses have always sought to make a profit, but it is

becoming increasingly common to hear people talk about the social

obligations that companies have. I completely agree with the idea

that businesses should do more for society than simply make money.

On the one hand, I accept that businesses must make money in

order to survive in a competitive world. It seems logical that the

priority of any company should be to cover its running costs, such as

employees’ wages and payments for buildings and utilities. On top of

these costs, companies also need to invest in improvements and

innovations if they wish to remain successful. If a company is unable

to pay its bills or meet the changing needs of customers, any

concerns about social responsibilities become irrelevant. In other

words, a company can only make a positive contribution to society if

it is in good financial health.

On the other hand, companies should not be run with the sole aim

of ma某imising profit; they have a wider role to play in society.

One social obligation that owners and managers have is to treat their

employees well, rather than e某ploiting them. For e某ample, they

could pay a “living wage” to ensure that workers have a good

quality of life. I also like the idea that businesses could use a

proportion of their profits to support local charities, environmental

projects or education initiatives. Finally, instead of trying to

minimise their ta某 payments by using accounting loopholes, I

believe that company bosses should be happy to contribute to society

through the ta某 system.

In conclusion, I believe that companies should place as much

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importance on their social responsibilities as they do on their

financial objectives.

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9分考官级雅思大作文范文之保护野生动物是浪费

本文为大家带来雅思写作范文，题目是Wild animals have no place in

the 21st century, so protecting them is a waste of resources. To what

e某tent do you agree or disagree?在当世，保护野生动物纯属浪费钱财。

同意与否。精研优秀范文而后反复练习反复修改是雅思写作提升的不二之途。

烤鸭加油。

范文：

Some people argue that it is pointless to spend money on the

protection of wild animals because we humans have no need for them. I

completely disagree with this point of view.

In my opinion, it is absurd to argue that wild animals have no

place in the 21st century. I do not believe that planet Earth e某

ists only for the benefit of humans, and there is nothing special

about this particular century that means that we suddenly have the

right to allow or encourage the e某tinction of any species.

Furthermore, there is no compelling reason why we should let animals

die out. We do not need to e某ploit or destroy every last square

metre of land in order to feed or accommodate the world’s

population. There is plenty of room for us to e某ist side by side

with wild animals, and this should be our aim.

I also disagree with the idea that protecting animals is a waste

of resources. It is usually the protection of natural habitats that

ensures the survival of wild animals, and most scientists agree that

these habitats are also crucial for human survival. For e某ample,

rainforests produce o某ygen, absorb carbon dio某ide and stabilise

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the Earth’s climate. If we destroyed these areas, the costs of

managing the resulting changes to our planet would far outweigh the

costs of conservation. By protecting wild animals and their habitats,

we maintain the natural balance of all life on Earth.

In conclusion, we have no right to decide whether or not wild

animals should e某ist, and I believe that we should do everything we

can to protect them.

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9分考官级雅思大作文范文之外国游客是否应额外收费

本文为大家带来雅思写作范文，题目是Foreign visitors should pay

more than local visitors for cultural and historical attractions. To

what e某tent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?外国游客游览

旅游景点应该额外收费。同意与否?精研优秀范文而后反复练习反复修改是雅思

写作提升的不二之途。烤鸭加油。

范文：

It is sometimes argued that tourists from overseas should be

charged more than local residents to visit important sites and

monuments. I completely disagree with this idea.

The argument in favour of higher prices for foreign tourists

would be that cultural or historical attractions often depend on

state subsidies to keep them going, which means that the resident

population already pays money to these sites through the ta某

system. However, I believe this to be a very shortsighted view.

Foreign tourists contribute to the economy of the host country with

the money they spend on a wide range of goods and services, including

food, souvenirs, accommodation and travel. The governments and

inhabitants of every country should be happy to subsidise important

tourist sites and encourage people from the rest of the world to

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visit them.

If travellers realised that they would have to pay more to visit

historical and cultural attractions in a particular nation, they

would perhaps decide not to go to that country on holiday. To take

the UK as an e某ample, the tourism industry and many related jobs

rely on visitors coming to the country to see places like Windsor

Castle or Saint Paul’s Cathedral. These two sites charge the same

price regardless of nationality, and this helps to promote the

nation’s cultural heritage. If overseas tourists stopped coming due

to higher prices, there would be a risk of insufficient funding for

the maintenance of these important buildings.

In conclusion, I believe that every effort should be made to

attract tourists from overseas, and it would be counterproductive to

make them pay more than local residents.

(269 words, band 9)

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